Friday, 20 February 2026

McBusted and Anakin Skywalker Dark Revelations Chapter five - Unmasked

 Here's the fifth chapter for my latest fan fiction starring the boys from my favourite boy bands McFly and Busted as their super group McBusted, Anakin Skywalker as portrayed by Hayden Christensen, my original character Dominic (make sure you have read his introductory story here) and a few Pokemon as guests (some of which have made their appearance from my other McBusted Pokémon Adventures stories or were featured in McBusted Adventures Legends of Seven Harmonies but canonially made their debut here). 

It's set as a direct sequel for one of my other stories McBusted Meets Anakin Skywalkler: The Forces of Light that beats the Darkness (make sure you read that story) and taken place sometime before McBusted Adventures Legends of Seven Harmonies. 

Link for the first chapter here

Link for the second chapter here

Link for the third chapter here

Link for the fourth chapter here

Having to become seperated from Dominic and Anakin, The McBusted boys fought agaainst the Star-Lords. 

Chapter 5

Meanwhile, the McBusted boys have fallen into piles of debris, thankfully unharmed. “Is everyone alright?” asked Charlie. “I’m in deeper shades in blue”, said Dougie as his way to enlighten the mood. “Come on now, we mustn’t be scared of the dark”, said Tom playing along, though they all helped each other to pick themselves up. “Where’s Dominic and Anakin? I hope they’re alright,” said Danny, worrying about our safety. They also noticed that their Pokéballs were missing, much to their concern so they wouldn’t be able to use them to help them out for their battle.

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It wasn’t long before the Star Lords showed up once again. “We got you all in our sights”, said Star-Lord Venus. “For the last time, what do you want from us?!” demanded Matt. “Why does it matter? Taking you all down is the only way to give back what was taken from us!” said Star-Lord, Mars still being cryptic. “This world, you mean? Just how defeating us would take back your world?” asked James. “Do we have to answer to that? It’s time that we finish what we’re supposed to do here and now!” cried Star-Lord Saturn. “Fine, if you’re going to be that way, then we’ll show you all what we’ve learned and kick your butts!” said Harry as they were ready to fight each other once more.

Once again, the Star Lords were shown to be formidable opponents with their desperation to defeat the McBusted boys, no matter the cost. Danny once again has to compete with Star-Lord Venus’ physical strength as he dodges Danny’s attacks, including the Megaton Punch, and leaps up into the air, slamming his fist surrounded by a shadowy aura onto the ground, which creates a shockwave that topples over his opponents like an earthquake. Danny quickly got back up and tried to strike with his Kinesis Punch, only for Star-Lord Venus to dodge and punch him down on the ground. “Give it up. There’s no escaping from the darkness that’ll consume you,” said Star-Lord Venus coldly. “That’s not true! I will show you!” said Danny, trying to be determined as he stood up.

Dougie fired his Mind Spheres towards Star-Lord Mercury, who fired his large shadowy sphere to take out the incoming spheres. He also has been knocking down nearby structures which fall towards Dougie while he wasn’t looking. He narrowly dodged them. “Bloody hell! That is so dangerous!” yelled Dougie. “That’ll make it more fun, like how you ran from what you were and hide from it by what you consume”, said Star-Lord Mercury sadistically.  

Star-Lord Uranus summoned a shadowy wind attack towards James, blowing various debris towards him. James countered them by summoning rock projectiles using Psy Rock, as said by James, “Time to clear out the trash”. However, Star-Lord Uranus used this as a distraction to freeze James by summoning shadowy icicle pillars. “There, you are better off not wanted like how others defines you” said Star Lord Uranus callously.

Tom fired several Planetary Spheres towards Star-Lord Mars, who dodges them or deflects them with his Lightsaber. Tom planned to catch Star-Lord Mars off guard to allow Tom to distort the space around Star-Lord Mars. “I have you in my sights!” said Tom, who about to execute his Spacial Distortion, but Star-Lord Mars was fired his shadowy beam towards the ground near Tom, which caused him to trip over. “It’s no use, you were never good enough”, said Star-Lord Mars grimly. I say that it would have been a great, smart plan by Tom.

Harry slowed down Star-Lord Jupiter’s movements with his Gravity. “Ha! Try catching up to me now!” taunted Harry. Star-Lord Jupiter, however, makes up for it by summoning a shadowy explosion near Harry, which tripped him over. “Nice try, but you think you’re so great? You can try to run, but you’ll only run from what others think of you and your responsibilities,” said Star-Lord Jupiter smugly.

Charlie blocks Star Lord Saturn’s Lightsaber attacks with his shield who then countered him using Shield Counter. Just as the move was countered, Star-Lord Saturn swings his Lightsaber at Charlie’s feet, causing him to trip over. “You’re a sellout and always will be”, said Star-Lord Saturn. “I don’t know where you get the idea, but I’m not!” argued Charlie.  

Matt and Star-Lord Neptune unleashed their explosive and shadowy waves, which would make a spectacular show with fancy special effects. As the moves collided with each other, Star-Lord Neptune used this opportunity to strike Matt with his Lightsaber, knocking him down. “What’s the point of improving yourself when you’ll only fail again and again?” said Star-Lord Neptune, who was about to strike with his Lightsaber, but Matt countered him with his Mind Explosion and said, “That won’t stop me from learning and bettering myself each time, thank you very much!”

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The McBusted boys were still having difficulties against the Star-Lords, giving them some doubt about whether they could truly master their psychic powers, even with our teaching for them to defeat the Star-Lords. Danny noticed that James became frozen, and Dougie was about to get crushed by another pillar that was collapsing as a result of Star-Lord Mercury’s attacks.

Striving to save his bandmates, Danny rushed towards the collapsed pillar, shouting “Dougie!” and grabbed the pillar just in time, holding it with his sheer, superhuman strength. It was heavier than he thought, so he channelled his psychic powers into his muscles for him to bulk up, gaining extra strength to lift the pillar, tossing it towards Star-Lord Venus, who attempted to stop him, yet he did not see this coming and crashed into the pillar.

Dougie was amazed by Danny’s heroic rescue and buffed physique, saying, “You’re certainly smarter than the Hulk!” Dougie helped Danny, too, by using his mind-controlling power on Star-Lord Mercury, who attempted to ambush Danny. This time, he managed to succeed by concentrating on the mind of his target with help from his desire to help Danny, forcing Star Lord Mercury to attack Star Lord Venus and Star Lord Uranus with his Lightsaber. “You make a great puppet master, Dougie!” cheered Danny. They both smiled and blushed at their compliment.

This was their chance to rescue James, with Danny punching through the ice with his bulked-up fist before his muscles reverted to their normal size. Danny and Dougie then helped to pick up James, holding each other’s hands tightly. “Thanks, I feel so warm with you both”, said James, smiling with admiration. “No matter which bands we’re from, we’re in this together with no one left behind”, said Danny, smiling back while looking him in the eye. “I might have slagged both of you off, but that means I love you all”, said Dougie, humouring Danny and James.

They were about to get attacked by Star Lord Venus, Star Lord Mercury and Star Lord Uranus (with Dougie’s mind control power having worn off by then), but Danny stopped Star Lord Venus by keeping his eyes on him to successfully strike his Megaton Punch. Meanwhile, James blows away Star Lord Uranus with his Psy Wind (without blowing away Danny and Dougie), and Dougie unleashes his Mind Storm on Star Lord Mercury to repel him.

As Tom got up, he spotted Harry, who had fallen on the floor and was about to be attacked by Star-Lord Jupiter. He wanted to help him, but Star Lord Mars was getting in the way, firing his shadowy laser beam towards him, so he concentrated with his mind to freeze time, slowing down Star Lord Mars and Star Lord Jupiter’s movements. Tom was pleased that he managed to pull it off, though he rushed over to Harry, helping to pick him up.

“Now that wasn’t bad of you, Tom”, said Harry, thanking him. “Always happy to lend a hand”, said Tom, holding his hand tightly. Just then, the time stop effect had worn off, and Tom got hit by Star-Lord Mars’ shadowy laser beam. Harry used Miracle Heal on him. With his desire to help Tom in return, he was able to fully heal him. “Thanks, that felt better”, said Tom, returning the favour by firing his Time Spheres at Star-Lord Mars. “It’s what I do best for you all”, replied Harry, firing his Healing Shots at Star-Lord Jupiter.

Matt spotted Charlie struggling to defend himself with his shields against Star-Lord Saturn’s shadowy blades and Lightsaber. Wanting to help him, he focuses his mind to land a well-timed Psy Explosion on Star-Lord Saturn. “Now that was like fireworks, Matt!” said Charlie, praising Matt, which flattered Matt. Charlie then spotted Star-Lord Neptune, who was about to attack Matt with his shadowy waves from behind. Quickly, Charlie summoned a black hole that absorbed the attack, exploding it on Star-Lord Saturn. Matt was grateful to Charlie for protecting him, saying, “You make a shining knight in armour.” Charlie blushed with admiration.  

The McBusted boys working closely together have given them a better chance against The Star Lords and to help them to master their psychic powers, including with Danny, Dougie and James telepathically communicating to each other to help to warn each other when they were about to get attacked by Star Lord Venus, Star Lord Mercury and Star Lord Uranus.

“It feels so warm to communicate with both of you telepathically,” said Danny, smiling as he kept an eye on Star-Lord Venus’ movements just after Dougie and James helped to forewarn him that he was about to sucker punch him when they both spotted him. “Yeah, thanks for the help”, said James with appreciation as he was told by Danny and Dougie via telepathy that Star-Lord Uranus was about to fire his shadowy lighting attack at him. “Telepathy sure keeps us close”, said Dougie with fascination and admiration.

The Star Lords were still formidable opponents, with them fighting closely and projecting one another. This is shown when James in self-defence against Star Lord Uranus’ shadowy lighting attack that he fired towards Danny and Dougie combined his Psy Fire and Psy Aqua (which he controlled carefully without spreading the flames or splashing the others) which created a dazzling rainbow that blinded Star Lord Uranus (with James saying in his mind “Just like the one we saw in Hyde Park! It shows that I have it in my blood with nothing shall stop me no matter what!”) but Star Lord Venus and Star Lord Mercury protected him by blocking Danny and Dougie’s attacks with their lightsabers. They picked up Star-Lord Uranus with Star-Lord Venus saying, “We won’t let you fall!” “Yeah, we’re in this together!” added Star-Lord Mercury. Star-Lord Uranus looked at them as if he really appreciated their help.

He then said, “Yeah, not one of us shall fall. Not before we destroy them!” and the Star Lords rapidly swings their lightsabers towards Danny, Dougie and James. Danny protected Dougie and James by quickly punch his fists surrounded by psychic power towards the Lightsabers, using his mind to focus on his opponents using Psycho Combat. Although Danny got hurt in the process, he fought bravely and valiantly as he protected his band mates, as he said to himself in his mind, “No matter the difficulties and what they say, I will remain strong for the sake of my journey and my loved ones!”

Danny and Star-Lord Venus’ punches collided with each other. The impact has caused them to fall backwards, but Dougie and James held his shoulders to save his fall with Dougie taking control of the Star Lord’s mind to prevent them from attacking them as Dougie said to himself, “Wow! It’s working! I feel stronger facing my fear”. With his mind, he tossed them onto the floor with Dougie saying, “And just stay down!” “Thanks for having my back”, said Danny, smiling at them once again as he linked their shoulders. “Always as my fellow biker partner”, said Dougie. “That’s what band mates are for after all” said James. They seem content being close together.

Star-Lord Mars and Star-Lord Jupiter combined their shadowy laser beam and shadowy explosion towards Tom and Harry. “Watch out!” called Tom, and using their quick instinct, they jumped up and levitated in the air. “Oh yeah, we still got it with our levitation!” cheered Tom. “You were born to fly after all” said Harry as they were both looking at each other while on the air. “Yes, this is incredible. It shows that my talent can still reach new heights,” said Tom to himself.

Star-Lord Mars fired his shadowy laser beam towards Tom and Harry while they were on the air, but Harry spotted it and fired his Healing Blaster to counter their attacks while engulfing the Star-Lords in a powerful psychic blast. “You've been Harried!” boasted Harry. “I guess you can be good at everything” said Tom just before their levitation worn off.  “It’s true that I want to be good at everything, but it’s only to improve myself and for the sake of my friends”, said Harry in his mind.

As soon as they landed on the ground, Star-Lord Jupiter sliced a structure, which caused the debris to fall towards Tom and Harry as he said, “It’s all to win and for what you did to Star-Lord Mars!” Tom, who halted the falling debris with his gravity, causing them to float in the air with Tom saying, “My Gravity shall make you dizzy” (referring to Star Girl), giving Harry a chance to take down Star Lord Jupiter using his Healing Shot. “I’ll make you pay!” cried Star Lord Mars, who was about to attack Harry, but Tom stopped him by using his Spacial Distortion in the surrounding area near Star Lord Mars, causing him to fall over. Tom and Harry happily gave a high five. “You are certainly talented, Tom!” cheered Harry. “Helping you to reach first place just like with Strickly Comes Dancing”, replied Tom.

Star-Lord Neptune fired his Shadowy Waves towards a pillar to shatter it, causing it to collapse near Matt and Charlie. “This will crush you all!” said Star-Lord Neptune. Quickly, Charlie held his Miracle Shield to protect Matt, concentrating with all his might and using his desire to protect Matt. “I must show that I am good enough, no matter the direction, for everyone’s sake!” said Charlie to himself.

With that, he can successfully hold the Magical Shield. “It’s all for you, Matt”, said Charlie as they looked at each other once again. “Thanks, Charlie also known as The Rhino, let’s do some spring cleaning”, said Matt, who used his telekinesis to remove the debris while he was shielded, this time with control, as he is able to move the debris successfully. Matt said to himself, “I aren’t running from my battles all to improve myself with people rooting for me!” Charlie helped him out, too, as they both aimed the debris towards Star-Lord Neptune’s Shadowy Waves in self-defence. He sliced his Lightsaber on one of the larger pieces of debris, which caused him to get hit.

“How dare you!” cried Star Lord Saturn, firing his shadowy blade attack toward them. Matt returned the favour to Charlie by countering the shadowy blade by firing his Energy Blaster. This gives Charlie an opening to fire his Shield Sphere towards Star-Lord Saturn, taking him down. Star Lord Neptune rushed towards Charlie and Matt, intending to avenge Star Lord Saturn with his lightsaber, but Matt fired a shot of energy towards Star Lord Neptune, which exploded on him using Energy Shot. “We make a great team!” cheered Charlie. “Always by my side”, said Matt warmly as they gave each other a bro-fist.

The McBusted boys continued to work together to gain the upper hand against the Star Lords, including by teleporting to dodge the Star Lord’s attacks and to protect one another, including James teleporting next to Danny and Tom to defend them using his Psy Wind to blow away the Star Lords, with James saying to them, “Thanks Team Danny and Tom aka The Piranha and Paddington Musical Writer. Us bands to got stick together!” “Thanks, Future Boy! We’re with you even if people get us mixed up,” said Danny. “You were the one who helped us, McFly, to rise to fame after all”, said Tom as they all affectionately patted each other. They also communicated telepathically to each other for moral support (including Matt telepathically saying to Dougie, “I’m right behind you!” and Dougie replying, “Thanks, you make me feel safe” while the two Kings of the Jungle were blushing) and used their levitation to avoid attacks, which resembled a McBusted jump (this time with Charlie). Charlie and Harry also helped out by regularly shielding and healing their bandmates with those two watching over each other.

Just as The Busted were about to get ambushed by Star Lord Uranus, Star Lord Neptune, and Star Lord Saturn, the McFly boys have spotted them with Tom and Harry slowing them down with their Time Stop and Gravity to give Danny and Dougie a chance to take them down with their Megaton Punch and Mind Spheres. Likewise, Star Lord Venus, Star Lord Mars, Star Lord Mercury and Star Lord Jupiter was about to attack the McFly boys, but Charlie shielded them with his Miracle Shield, which was James and Matt’s cue to take them down with their Psy Aqua and Energy Sphere. They all held their hands each time with love and reassurance.

“And that shows that we’re the best!” said Harry as they all charged up their Star Force Shocker while the Star Lords were down. “No matter which bands we’re from, we shall get through this together!” said Charlie and tossed their projectiles towards The Star Lords.

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This caused The Star Lord’s masks to crack, which revealed that The Star Lord’s true identities...were the McBusted boys who came from this alternative world. Star Lord Venus is Danny, Star Lord Mars is Tom, Star Lord Uranus is James, Star Lord Saturn is Charlie, Star Lord Mercury is Dougie, Star Lord Neptune is Matt, and Star Lord Jupiter is Harry. I’ll refer those alternative world McBusted boys as the Dark McBusted boys, just like with my alternative world counterpart.

It’s something that I should have seen coming with The Star Lord specifically targeting the McBusted boys based on their counterpart, The Star Lords being agitated when my Psycho Beam was fired near the graveyard, them refusing to attack me, the way they were protective with one another and the fact that Anakin and I had our alternative world counterpart. Still, it was a great shock for the McBusted boys to fight their exact doubles all along.

“What? But you’re...me?!” said Danny in disbelief. “My exact double?!” cried James.  “I have an evil twin all along?” said Dougie, flabbergasted. “But how could...” said Charlie with confusion. “Yes, we are you in this world”, answered Dark Dougie. “But why did you want to kill us?” asked Tom.

Their alternative world counterparts explained that Lord Dimegulia had arrived in their world one day and assumed the role of their dictator. People rebelled against Lord Dimegulia to overthrow him, but none were able to stop his wrath, and he turned their world into ruin. Among those who lost their lives during Lord Dimegulia’s rampage were their family. “I still remember their screams when I last saw Georgia and Cooper. As soon as I lost them, so did my sanity,” said Dark Danny hauntingly. “I wasn’t strong enough to save Giovanna and my kids, as I remember the looks on their faces before Lord Dimegulia took them away from me”, said Dark Tom grimly.

The McBusted boys felt sorry for the loss of their alternative world family members, feeling their pain. They reached out to their alternative world selves for a hug, but they backed off. “Don’t you pity us! We are enemies!” said Dark Charlie fiercely. They then continued their story.

The Dark McBusted boys were then trapped in the rumble, with the last person they saw was my alternative self, getting separated from them. They became heavily injured and were left to die, but it was Anakin from an alternative universe who found them while travelling through space, having to lose everything, finding them by sensing their psychic power, which is said to have led him to them.

“We have nowhere else to go, so he took us under his wing”, said Dark James. “The only thing left for us is to turn to the dark side as he has, throwing away everything we have”, said Dark Charlie, which explains their discarded instruments we saw earlier. So, Darth Vader has taught them everything about the dark side, teaching them new powers and giving them their armour identical to his. They were given names after the planets that Darth Vader had come across while wandering around this alternative universe after his universe was destroyed.

Among the new powers the Star Lords have learned is to travel through dimensions, which explains how they were able to enter our world. They used that power to find new worlds to conquer, having to lose their world, which ended up in failure each time.

Although the McBusted boys sympathise with their lost, they couldn’t agree with their alternative counterparts falling to the dark side and conquering worlds with Darth Vader because of it.  “I’m sorry for your loss, but how would turning to the dark side and conquering worlds justify your loss? This would make you no different to Lord Dimegulia. What would Izzy say if she were alive and saw the man you have become?!” questioned Harry. “Silence! Izzy is dead! You clearly don’t understand our pain and loss! Turning to the dark side is the only way for us not to lose each other!” cried Dark Harry. “He’s right, and Emma would be proud of how we have become stronger with the dark side and find a new world for us to live our lives!” added Dark Matt. “I know Emma; she would be appalled and ashamed! Turning to the dark side is only admitting defeat!” argued Matt.

To top it all off, the alternative world McBusted boys then added that they were told by Lord Dimegulia that if they killed their other self from another world, then he would bring their family back to life, balancing the cohort of both worlds.  “But isn’t there another way we can help?” asked Tom. “I don’t want us to be enemies. We may have come from different worlds, but we’re the same after all,” added James. “There is no other way! It’s your world or ours!” cried Dark Tom.

That is when the McBusted remembered that they played “Give light to the world” earlier, as said by Danny, “But we played this song that helped our friend Anakin to receive powers from the World Giver, which will help him to defeat Lord Dimegulia. Maybe it’ll help to restore your world!” Matt backed him up, saying, “With you guys being our alternative sleeves, you could have been the ones to use your singing voices and talent to get access to the World Giver instead of turning to the dark side and conquering worlds!”

The Dark McBusted boys were not convinced with Dark James saying, “It’s no use with our family, friends, Pokémon and fans are dead. Nothing can bring them back unless we kill you all.” “Besides, I have already told you that we have thrown away our past selves. Our careers mean nothing to us now,” said Dark Charlie.  

It was that moment when Lord Dimegulia showed up, laughing at them, saying, “Ho! Ho! Where are those precious masks of yours and this master you all hold dear now?” “What do you want? This won’t stop us from finishing the job as we're supposed to!” said Dark Danny with contempt. “Yeah, killing those other selves will bring back our world and our loved ones including Yasmeen as you said, but we can do this ourselves!” said Dark Dougie.

“Me? Bring back your world and your loved ones? As if I would do such a mundane thing! I have no such power to do so, even if I wanted to!” said Lord Dimegulia mockingly, much to everyone’s disbelief. Lord Dimegulia revealed that he lied to Dark McBusted boys and Darth Vader (which is something that he does regularly, but still...) and only used them for their powers to travel dimensions as he happened to witness himself. Although Lord Dimegulia is still unstoppable, his powers to enter dimensions were going weaker every time he travels to another world to conquer and destroy, only having little power to left so he was stuck in this world.

So the Dark McBusted boys were rendered speechless, having to be lied to and used all this time and the fact that killing their other world selves would be all for nothing. “Your pants are certainly on fire!” yelled Dougie. “So what? None of you will live to tell a tale!” said Lord Dimegulia as he attacked the rooftop, causing it to collapse in an attempt to bury both world’s McBusted boys while he made his getaway.

To be continued 

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